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Coriolanus Act 1 Analysis
Act 1 characterizes
Caius Martius in scene 1 through the perspective of the tribunes and the
citizens. This introduces the first conflict - between Martius and the citizens
as they feel they are not given enough corn/grain. The citizens instantly think
that the solution to the problem is to kill Martius due to the fact he is
”…chief enemy to the people.” The issues are not resolved at the end of the
scene, therefore the reader feels unease as conflict continues. Scene 2 adds
onto Martius’ conflict as Aufidius is introduced to be Martius’ prime enemy. There’s
a contrast to Aufidius and Coriolanus based on what we know so far. Aufidius
reads this letter of an attack on the Volsces which includes “Who is of Rome
worse hated than of you” regarding Coriolanus. Scene 3 characterizes Martius’
family members – especially his mother, Volumnia, who encourages her son’s
brutality, comparing that if he were her husband, she would have comfort seeing
him out on war than having comfort in their own intimacy in bed. Virgilia –
Martius’ wife – is seen as the typical damsel in distress and would rather have
her husband in the safety of her view. Only in scene 3 of the first act of the
play, we are given another perspective of Coriolanus through the eyes of his
mother. She encourages him to be the strongest of all. And she praises his
nobility.
Shakespeare’s larger
purpose in his characterization of Coriolanus in Act 1 is to introduce the setting
surrounding this ‘hero’ who is Coriolanus. The genre states that the play is
considered ot be a political play, so Act 1 may exhibit how the effects of an
individual in a society (Coriolanus) affects the rest of society. Scene 1
presents the conflict between the citizens and Coriolanus and because these
issues were not resolved, history of this conflict stacks and carries on
throughout the play... So far, it shows that although Coriolanus proves to be
noble to his side, his personality is one that is unlikeable by the people. At
the end of Act 1, with the added perspective of Aufidius, it adds on the
intimacy and intensity of the relationship between him and Coriolanus.
I liked how you identified the relationships between each of the characters. You also spoke briefly on the perspectives of Coriolanus from each character, including his mother. You did well when explaining how the perspective on Coriolanus will play a part in his conflict. To improve, I would add more transitioning words or phrases (ex. at the beginning of the new paragraph) and try to elaborate more on certain statements such as "There’s a contrast to Aufidius and Coriolanus based on what we know so far." Overall, great analysis!
ReplyDeleteOverall this is a good description of the characterization of Coriolanus in Act 1. I really enjoyed the last sentence where it is stated that the relationship with Coriolanus and Aufidius is intimate and intense but I would like more quotes to be included in the text as well as more parts from other scenes on Act 1. But the concept is conveyed and his characterization is well conducted.
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